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Write a Formal Essay (continued)
Enlist a peer editor
After you've completed a draft of your essay,
show it to a classmate, friend, or teacher. A peer
editor can be anybody willing to read your essay
and offer feedback. To make sure you get the most
constructive feedback, give him or her a list of
questions, such as:
Are there any spelling or grammatical
mistakes or typos? Have the person circle
these proofreading issues.
Does the introduction grab the reader's
attention? If not, perhaps the peer editor can
offer a suggestion, or say why it doesn't work.
Is the thesis statement clear? Ask the
peer editor to underline what he or she believes
to be the thesis statement. If he or she can't, identify the thesis and
ask for advice on how to make it sharper.
Is there sufficient information to back up
the thesis statement? Ask for feedback about
what works and what doesn't. Are there any points
that need more explanation? Have you answered all
the questions or concerns put forth in your
introduction?
Does the conclusion wrap up the essay?
Does it summarize your main points without
repeating them? Does it offer a final view of the
topic that couldn't have been reached without the
supporting evidence?
Are there any general comments to make the
paper better? The peer editor should feel free
to elaborate, and you should take what is said as
constructive criticism.
Knowing the basics of writing a formal essay
takes you one step ahead of the class. Keep in
mind, though, that the greatest teacher is the
writing process itself. The more essays you write,
the better you'll get at it.
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