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Learn2 Write a Formal Essay (continued)

Create a thesis statement

Once you've developed a strong idea, it's time to make a statement about it. This thesis statement is usually expressed in one or two sentences, and will give direction to the entire essay. It's not simply a narrowed topic, but rather a direct assertion about a topic. When developing a thesis statement:

Don't make it too obvious. If you merely state the obvious, you may lose your reader's attention. For example, if your topic is "class size in school," it's too easy to say, "Big classes make it harder to talk to the teacher."

Turn your topic into a question and then answer it. This will help you determine the central idea of your essay. For example, your thesis question could be, "Does class size affect the learning experience?" To form a thesis statement, thoroughly answer your own question: "Small classes foster the development of a more productive educational experience."

Limit the scope. Ask yourself if you can make your thesis statement more focused. For example, it may narrow the scope of your thesis, if you change it to, "Small classes in larger universities foster more productive learning in literature and writing classes."

Note: Once you have a statement, show it to your teacher, editor, or brainstorming partner before you begin to write your essay. This person can help you further refine and focus your thesis.